Further Developement

Ok so been thinking more about my story line and how im going to have it layed out. The story will begin by introducing you to this world where everyone has special powers and when they are young they are sent to this old ladies house. She encourages the children to find there abilaities but not in the gently caring way you might expect. She pushes the children through dangerous and scarey situation to the point where they need to use there ability to save them selves. The old lady has reputation to uphold and will make sure all the children find there gift. We then meet Timmy a strange little boy who is pushed through all this obsticles and fails them all. He is squashed battered and burned but still no special ability. We see Timmy dissapointed as the other children dicover there gifts. There will be a long series of little skits going on here. We see Timmy alone and depressed after all this abuse and here we see the old lady start to feel for Timmy and as she goes to comfort Timmy he eats her. Well that was my initail idea but since the feedback session I have decieded to change the ending slightly and give Timmy a more significant power which Im still working on. I have also further developed some ideas for other children and the designs for the main characters. I feel my designs for the main characters have improved and Im starting find their final image. Timmy is a strange dark little boy while the old lady will be quite a comical character but nasty and bitter.